week 2

This week was so fantastic I went to school just for 2 days because of the snow holiday.On wednesday I hoped to do the reading about 'The Seductive Space' but we did not therefore, I forgot the topic and I have to scan it. I wish we will do the reading this week :)

We did not do the reading but it was good for me. Because I learned that my writing was terrible.The important point,this lesson is about writing.We talked about our diagnostic essays and Mr O'Regan told us that if he gave our a grade lots of us would get F.When I heard this I felt very restless, I thought that I wrote well enough because I read 'The Electronic Addiction' .However, this was not important so much because I also have to answer the right question.If I write a lot but also not answer the question I also get F. And I do it a lot because when I start to write,I try to write all I know and then I forget the question.

In the lesson Mr O'Regan told about our writings and gave us some advices.This advices helps me actually and the feedback showed my mistakes.on the other hand, there is a hope because I wrote a thesis on my diagnostic essay :) At the end I repeat my wish, I hope I can get a good grade in comm 101 :)